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Post by Star on Feb 14, 2015 16:56:45 GMT -6
So far, its good but dawy makes a really valid point. Here and in rp you tend to powerplay Severin a little bit and appreciate if you could just a little more attentive to avoiding that. ^.^ i do have one more concern. =/ sorry i only seam to have negative things to say. That means you did the other stuff right tho  . So I mentioned it before but I'm going to ask again, please change her power. Its too close to Severins and it says explicitly in his description that he is the only one who interacts with his wraiths. |
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Post by meriakittypants on Feb 14, 2015 17:34:24 GMT -6
The thing is, I don't really know how she feels at this point. More of her emotions will come out as the mini plot with the Valentines come into play, but for now she is more or less a supporting character. For Severin, I tried to be very basic and left her feelings out and basically went with what I saw so far. At times, he does seem a little abusive to him, and they don't actually have a good relationship. When I said a toxic relationship that was addicting, I was meaning that it is a bad situation that is also very addicting to Dagmar. I would like to get more of their relationship in depth, but I kinda need to roleplay before hand, and Star needs to post.
BTW Dagmar just see the dead, like, ghosts. She cannot control them, and I thought that wraiths just ghosts.
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Post by Star on Feb 14, 2015 17:53:07 GMT -6
ghosts and wraiths are the same thing
So far as i know there arent any other ghosts though Niitari would have the final say on that.
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Post by meriakittypants on Feb 14, 2015 18:06:05 GMT -6
Well I thought they were just old people who died. Dagmar can talk to them and see them, but she cannot actually control them. To her, Ghosts and wraiths are like everyone else, expect that they are dead..And can float LOL.
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Post by Star on Feb 14, 2015 18:22:39 GMT -6
the ghosts and wraiths are the same thing, unles Niitari says otherwise there are none except the ones Severin summons.
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. So I mentioned it before but I'm going to ask again, please change her power. Its too close to Severins and it says explicitly in his description that he is the only one who interacts with his wraiths.
